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  1. Brad BlackstoneMarch 6, 2024 at 6:58 PM

    Thanks much, Amir, for the pitch. You're and clear. Your eye contact is effective too. I'd only suggest that you be careful about the overuse of the word "guys" in a professional pitch.

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